Seek not the paths of the ancients; seek that which the ancients sought. -Basho
Daniel, thanks so much for offering this up for Books and Culture.I read through it several times and decided that I enjoy the first stanza the best. You have such good rhythm there. I especially likethis stretch of desertbetween boardwalk resortsand coastline gone lankThat image is an interesting variation on the old adage between a rock and hard place. It implies a lot about the state of our culture.
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Daniel, thanks so much for offering this up for Books and Culture.
I read through it several times and decided that I enjoy the first stanza the best. You have such good rhythm there. I especially like
this stretch of desert
between boardwalk resorts
and coastline gone lank
That image is an interesting variation on the old adage between a rock and hard place. It implies a lot about the state of our culture.
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